As its title implies, this book deals with revising , not with original composition. In business writing, where a first draft often emerges quickly under the pressures of facts, figures, and deadlines, revision is typically the major part of a writing task, and collaborative revision often produces the final document. Revising Business Prose provides detailed revision guidance and a collaborative approach to writing easily applied to writing in business, industry, government, and academics. Based on the premise that bad writing in organizations imitates the bureaucratic style "The Official Style," as it's called here this book shows students how to transform stilted, dense prose into plain English. an accompanying 40-minute Revising Business Prose Video , as well as a Set of Interactive Revision Exercises , are available from Rhetorica, Inc. for an additional fee.